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Freezing Snow pt.2

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Four layers. That all she could do for now. Her hooves stung with what little feeling they had. At least now the wall she had built was tall enough to block most of the wind and the snow she had used now revealed the frozen ground. She curled up close enough to the wall to be protected and tucked her hooves under herself in an attempt to warm them.

For a moment she stared at her accomplishment, proud that she had managed to get as far as she did. Her vision lowered to her nearly featherless wings. What was she to do now? They were turning black, and she could not as easily cover them with her body. Letting out a sigh, she rested her head on her wrists. A tear escaped her eye, slid down her cheek, and then froze to her fur. She hardly noticed, after all she was now covered in snow that did little to warm her.

Now she had time to think, as what little warmth from her stomach gave some feeling back to her hooves. Twilight's Library. A spell. Did Twilight accidentally teleport her here? No. Twilight is clumsy, but not so much so to endanger her friends. What was the spell!? Her memory danced. Twilight's romp was predominant. "WHAT!? I was staring at her ass!?" Rainbow exclaimed. She covered her snout knowing that speaking would also dehydrate her. Rainbow continued trying to remember what had happened before. There was yelling. A familiar buzzing noise. Why was it so familiar?

Twilight's butt…it changed to black? Those eyes…those green eyes…Rainbow's head shot up in horror. QUEEN CRYSALIS!? How had she come back!? And why did she send Rainbow Dash here? Rainbow stood, forgetting all of her pain. "I HAVE TO GET BACK!" after her outburst she found herself flat on the ground coughing vigorously. Her throat was dry, and her tongue stuck to the roof of her mouth. She was becoming dehydrated. The snow surrounding her little living space became very tempting. The problem with eating snow was that it would provide very little hydration, while draining one of any remaining body heat. Rainbow knew she needed all the body heat she could get, but she was so thirsty.

Cold, thirsty, hungry, and tiered. Her spine stung from her constant shivering. Once again she balled herself up in an attempt at staying warm. So now she remembered who had sent her here, but what could she do once she got back. She licked her nose to try and warm it up, but all that did was make it colder as her saliva drew the warmth from it. She couldn't get warm. No matter what she did. Without any blankets or a roof over her head to stop the rest of the blistering wind from reaching her, she was never gaining any warmth. Her internal body temperature was beginning to reach a dangerous low.

Her heart slowed, her mind became numb, and her eyes grew heavy. She was exceptionally tiered. The outburst of excitement at her memory had drained more resources from her than she had thought. She knew she had to stay awake though. If she slept, her body would give up, and she would for sure perish.

She raised her head up, keeping her bloodshot eyes from closing. How long did she have to be like this? Could she last? She shook her head vigorously in attempts at keeping her eyes open, but all this did was make here even more tiered. "I can't give up now! All I have to do is stay awake till this blizzard dies off…" she looked above her at the snow flakes whizzing past. "But how long will that be?"

Warmth, where was it coming from? That bright light, what was causing it? The thoughts of death pushed through Rainbow's mind. Was she to no longer suffer?

TO BE CONTINUED!
Part 1:[link]
Part 3:[link]

Part 2 of Frozen Snow. So now we know who sent her to this frozen land, but why? and how did Crysalis come back? Is Rainbow Dash dead? SO MANY QUESTIONS!!!!

onward to Part 3!
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CobaltTheFox's avatar
Hmm.. No offense, but, this part didn't do as much for me as part one. :shrug: I'll be sure and read part 3 though, maybe it'll clear out some of those questions..